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I AM A LOSER. >_>
« Thread Started on Jan 7, 2008, 2:11am »

Yeah... So... I don't have confidence in my poetry... But ha... Here it is.

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« Reply #1 on Jan 7, 2008, 2:12am »

"Falling Apart"

When they see her
She's so perfect
So strong, she doesn't need
Someone to take care of her
But there's things they don't
They don't know this girl
Her smiles are fake
No one would ever know
They think they give
But they only take
They're taking all that's left
Of the mess that was created
But she doesn't tell
She doesn't tell them
the truth behind the lies
She's not okay.
But you can't blame just them
She never lets them know
She never lets them in
She's the reason
The reason she's alone.
To them she's so perfect
To herself she's a disaster
She's barely keeping it together
You can see the pain in her eyes
And she can feel it in her heart
They know the turth in her lies
They know that she's falling apart.

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« Reply #2 on Jan 7, 2008, 2:14am »

Waiting for Me

Foresaken
Forgotten
You don't care anymore, do you?
You've left me here alone again.
You've abandoned me here again.
Your touch chills my outsides
Your words freeze my insides
What are you trying to do?
Why are you killing me?
Slowly but surely...
I can feel it...
Everyday...
I'm being pushed to the edge
Slowly but surely...
It's coming..
My day
It's gonna take me over the edge...

I'm trying to keep holding on
But everyday my grip loosens up
Please help me before I let go
I can see you standing there
But it feels like you're not
Are you waiting for me
Are you watching me
Are you waiting for the day I let go?

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« Reply #3 on Jan 7, 2008, 2:14am »

Remember Me

I deampt I was missing
From a world so cold
I knew you would miss me
I left you all alone
No longer kept safe
By the words I told

I know what I told you
I said I'd be here for you
But even though those words were true
I won't be here forever
One day it will be over

I dreampt I was missing
No longer pretending
No more saying I was okay
No longer keeping friends at bay

But don't worry about me
One day I'm not gonna be here
Everything will be okay
Don't cry for me
Please just see

Everything wasn't always perfect
Everything won't always be perfect
Just enjoy the time that we've got
Because then I won't be a memory forgotten
I know I wasn't always perfect
But I did my best for you.

Always stay strong for me
Always be as best as can be
Make sure everyone can see
What a soldier you grew up to be
And remember the person who taught you

Make sure you're a soldier
So no one can hurt you
Because that day when I'm not here
Everything is up to you
And I'm hoping things are better
For everyone, especially you.

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Re: I AM A LOSER. >_>
« Reply #4 on Jan 12, 2008, 2:55am »

The Crimson River

Dig into the dam that Restrains
Dig into that which causes you pain
Release the pain, Release the sorrow
Let the Crimson River flow
It shall remove all the pain, all the sorrow
It shall be our salvation
It shall be our liberation
Watch The flow of the River
Whisper your goodbyes
This is the final act of Destruction
One final act of Eradication
Don't worry, everything will be alright
I'll be waiting on the other side

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